More writing in Once I Was You, involving an old French song and a pastoral bvacation/b. This bit is set on a world called Cloedine, where our POV character is taking a break from her work as an envoy. She keeps hearing snippets of some ancient song: ? la b.../b Torii = plural of btorus/b, I think. So it's a city of orbital toruses. (Checking closer, it should be "tori".) Elysium ? I was going for a pastoral paradise, and I didn't research my word usage. That's an oops on my part. b.../b
other repeated comments included: "where there is silence, the spirit is eloquent" and "one feels one is at last entering into the bestate/b of the soul, the state of stillness and peace". the visitors were aided in their efforts by the b.../b
